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Do you ever wonder
if i ever do get scared
Do you ever wonder
if i ever give a care
Do you have to let life
hit you in the end
with a lifelong retribution
and a humble hand to lend

And if i fall before you get here
please leave me with myself
and if i die before you shed tears
please call on someone else

and in your dreams of past times
do you sleep among the rest
a comfort knowing that there was a dime
to buy the things that we forget
but the past now seems so far away
and a dream is nothing yet
a reassurance that there is a day
in which we will never fret

and if i fall before you get here
please leave me with myself
and if i die before you shed tears
please call on someone else

is it that i think about you
everyday and every night
is it that i want you more
than even me in my life
is it that my love for you
reaches further than the sky
is it that when i tell you this
all you want to do is cry

and if i fall before you get here
please help me off the floor
and if i die before you shed tears
please dont shed them anymore
just something nice to get off all the anger that has been the subject of my poetry lately..sorry for having just that...minds been focusing on too many bad things...but now for good things...song..nice,sing,dance,relive the moment of childhood youth wrapped up in a song..nahjust read it and enjoy it if you didnt shoot yourself already from reading this description
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FallenVixen Featured By Owner Nov 12, 2004
wow, im very impressed. The bridge/chorus is very touching. I really enjoyed this piece, it truely is one of your best. And I am very greatful for the break of anger. This is so sensitive and touching, I really love it. And that last stanza, oh, if my eyes werent in so much pain, i would cry. Truely beautiful.
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Krytonite Featured By Owner Nov 12, 2004
lol yay thankeyou
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IcyWhispersX Featured By Owner Nov 10, 2004
me likey!!! koo, this is so good, dang u , wish i cud think of something to write about, ahh well...lyl ttyl
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Krytonite Featured By Owner Nov 11, 2004
you can think of something....just sit there and write..im sure something good will come out of it
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peaceplacid Featured By Owner Nov 9, 2004   Writer
wow, that is really deep. excellent.
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Krytonite Featured By Owner Nov 9, 2004
domo
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CorkyBug Featured By Owner Nov 6, 2004   Writer
:cry: *sniffs* that was sad.....whaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa!!!!!!!!! :cries: :tears:

so who was that song for? :devilish:
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Krytonite Featured By Owner Nov 6, 2004
hmmmmmmmmmmm...........................* tries to think of a lie*
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CorkyBug Featured By Owner Nov 17, 2004   Writer
why would u wanna lie??? WHATS GOING ON WITH UR HEAD?!?!??!!?!?!!
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Krytonite Featured By Owner Nov 17, 2004
well my head is not a pretty place to be in...and i cant even put into words some of the crap thats going on in it.....but yah....dont worry about it...im fine...so you should be fine now............. HUG ME!!!!! :hug: lol
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